Tuesday 21 April 2020

The Journey of the Noble Gnarble

Far below the ocean waves are gnarble lay in bed All night long his gnarble dreams kept swimming in his head. He dreamt a dream of swimming up to see the sky above lit up by the sun in Colours he just knew he’d loved. But gnarble knew that he never swam that high, their fin was much to small their tail was much to thin and floppy wich didn’t help at all.This gnarble  is liked his fin and have no problem with his tail So when he woke he knew that he just couldn’t fail. So then he had a plan to have a trip so he packed lot of thing and then he went but then when he arrived where no one was there because there was a big shark and people was so scared. But the fish say no shark can bite me So he went and the big shark chase him and then the shark swollen the fish the fish got in the fish got smelly he wanted to get out but he never can get out but then he tickled the shark and shark laugh and the fish ran and went out for ever never came back. The fish tell all of the that what happened to him. He and his children’s that he find that was lost made lot of house and sell it and they gave lot of money and throw candy all around the ocean the people liked him so much that he was so famous and he had the biggest house and he gave his all out.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ponyamon. I love your creative writing. I can see you are trying really hard to use full stops in your writing. Good boy

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