Monday, 4 May 2020
getting noisey
Today it was noisy because there was lot of rain and it keep stopping and raining that why i got very angry because so noisy and loud so that why i got angry then i went and look at the rain and then the rain was so big and then i felt bad for the bird because it was a lot of rain and they have to find food so they can and be full i wish that there was no rain but there is. but the bird might get to eat full.At night the rain was so loud my sister keratin fly and the rain was going to get in the house but it could"t because we close all the window but not the last one so we can have some air but if we can not breath that much we might die but if the rain come there a much air. my family was busy but i was so angry because the rain was keep coming and then it rain then it coming again and stop and came again so i just walk away and have a little rest then i do what i have to do after that i do some of my mum hard work after i eat then the rain came again me ear was like it want to die because the rain was like the biggest and i could not even sleep because it was like the biggest sound ever that i ever herd in my life it was like a volcano or a thunder. the rain is very spical because it help us get water but the rain is not spical for me because it is very noisy and it make me wit and it make me sick because the rain is very cold that why.
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Hi Ponyamon,
ReplyDeleteYou are writing so much on your Blog, well done. Could you please read through your writing and see if you can find ways you could fix some of this writing. Have you been on our class site? there is some really cool things to see and do on our site and I'm sure you will find lots to do.
Ms Tumahai