One day stick man went jogging then he saw a dog that was going for him stick man was tired to get home so the dog got him after the dog was not allow to play at the park with the stick the dog was angry but stick man was release after stick man fall into the sea then stick man floated all the way to a beach the kid pick it up and say this is the right stick for our castle and then stick man say im not a stick for your castle after that stick man fall asleep he was cold and he yawn then a boy picked him up and was going to burn him then suddenly he woke up and ran then he saw Santa and help him to gave present to the kid and then Santa say ‘ho ho’ it time for you to got home, stick man stick man
did not come home early the kid was like it will not be fun with stick dad when Santa was going to put him inside he fall the bat took him and then Santa could not get him lot of people use him he said I’m not a bow and say I’m not a pen or a bag I’m stick man I’m stick Man can anyone help after a bird help him the bird was a nice cute bird stick man said Thank you and then they all live happily ever after.
Hi Ponyamon, Thank you for sharing your writing about the Stick Man. Did you read the story? what was your favourite part? Don't forget to read your writing back and make sure you have full-stops and capital letters.
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